Friday, May 14, 2010

larger "conversations" for Andrei


  1. Thanks, Rosaire! You know, I really like this, and--if I may--I think I would like it even more without the frame lines. You don't need them, the black shapes themselves function as panels, and the page looks better without them.

  2. I agree it would be visually stronger without the frame lines - but those lines are what prevent the intruding white from indicating infinite space/ time : the areas of white surrounding the black need to be particular for each instance in this 'narrative'.

  3. I honestly don't think so--I erased the red lines on a jpeg I downloaded, and, if anything, it looks even more clearly sequential.


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